hair loss poem

Discussion in 'Inspiration' started by snowflake, Mar 5, 2012.

  1. snowflake

    snowflake New Member

    When upset I write in rhyme, answers are what I hope to find,
    To conquer this tormenter that now consumes my mind.
    Though we all have our story, what’s important to do
    Is sharing experiences and information of what helped you
    Through this guidance a truth may appear,
    giving hope that an end to this nightmare is near.
    It started out slowly about a year ago
    Something about my hair was different, I just didn’t know
    what was about to happen, would be devastatingly so.
    Then a few months later within two months time,
    All of a sudden I’m surprised to find
    All over the place are hairs of mine,
    On the floor, my clothes and the bed
    Everywhere, but not staying on my head.
    And then I learn it’s perplexing to find
    The reason behind this loss so unkind
    It’s causing despair and scaring the hell out of me
    Changing the person I used to be
    Will I ever find the cause of what it may be?
    None of the tests show anything to see.
    The options for treatment are just a few
    It’s a wait and see game to decide what to do
    And then what you try, if it will work takes time,
    Only adds to unneeded stress wondering if your hair will ever be fine.
    If you think you see some change that might mean hope
    How long must one wait to be sure, it’s enough to drive me berserk!
    Approaches from doctors, no two opinions ever seem to be the same
    Knowing who to trust becomes part of the game
    Some don’t care, don’t know or they guess at what to do
    Are they selling me something useless? This may often be true.
    But figuring this out is really left up to you!
    This condition for me came out of the blue
    Didn’t know where to find help or what I should do
    Countless tears I cried for each hair in the sink
    It effects how I feel, what I want to do, and how I think.
    My hair feels so different, much thinner, this I know well
    I try to hide what’s no longer there, hoping no one can tell
    The worst of this plight I now think I see,
    That true medical options, many just doesn’t seem to be
    If told one thing to try, then the next opinion will be contradictory,
    So I realize in the end the best judgment to trust is all up to me?
  2. August

    August New Member

    Thank you for sharing your poem. You really made an effort and I appreciate it so much,...
  3. shinning_likeme

    shinning_likeme New Member

    Thats a very very very beautiful poem Snowflake, Thanku for such a good poem. Why dont you sing this and update a video of yours. It will be even more good.